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I would like to talk about important plant in my country.
>>> I would like to talk about an important plant in my country.
 It is a cherry blossom that is the national flower of japan.
>>>  It is the cherry blossom which is also the national flower of Japan. They call it sakuragi.
 It is widely distributed in my country.
>>> It is widely grown in my country.
 When Cherry blossom flower blooms, it announces arrival of spring season in my country.
>>>  When Cherry blossom flowers blooms, it announces the arrival of spring season in my country.
 It also gives families a chance to spend precious time with their loved ones through all various activities that can be taken advantage of outdoors.
>>> It also gives the opportunity for families to do some outdoor activities together.  Most of us take advantage of the great outdoors.
 And there are cherry blossom festivals celebrating the lovely spring atmosphere in Korea
>>> Moreover, there are cherry blossom festivals being celebrated in different parts of Korea as a celebration of the lovely spring atmosphere.
 Personally I like cherry blossom. Because it looks very beautiful when blooming flower.
>>> Personally, I like the cherry blossom flower because it looks so beautiful when it blooms.
 Why do you think some people love having plants and flowers in their homes?
 I think that having a plant is similar to raise animal.
>>> I think growing a plant is similar to raising an animal.
We have to give a water regularly.
>>> We have to water it regularly.
 Having a plant in my home make me more healthy as they absorb CO2 in my room and release good scent
>>> Scientifically speaking, having a plant at home is a healthier way to live because it is known to absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen in return. It gives my house clear air.
 Which plant or flower is the most popular? Why is that?
 I think that it is an rose because most of people buy rose for present in special day such as wedding day
>>> I think that rose is the most popular flower because people buy it as a present on special occasions like weddings.