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2018-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 May

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think dieting is not just about losing weight, but about staying healthy. Because I think health is a great asset to people. If you are not healthy, you can\'t feel and report everything in the world. I was in the hospital once because I was very sick. Then I gained a lot of weight and started dieting for my health. I weighed up to 69 kilograms then, but now I weigh 53 kilograms. I started to stay healthy, but now I\'ve lost weight and recovered my health.

강사 첨삭

Hi Laina! Thanks for sharing this to me. Health is wealth. So take care of your health! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

think dieting is not just about losing weight, but about staying healthy. Because I think health is a great asset to people.

>> I think having a diet is not just about losing weight, but it\'s also about staying healthy because health is a great asset to people.

If you are not healthy, you can\'t feel and report everything in the world.

>> If you are not healthy, you will not be able to work properly and happily.

I was in the hospital once because I was very sick. Then I gained a lot of weight and started dieting for my health.

>> I was in the hospital once because I was very sick then I gained a lot of weight. So, I started to have a diet.

I weighed up to 69 kilograms then, but now I weigh 53 kilograms.

>> CORRECT

I started to stay healthy, but now I\'ve lost weight and recovered my health.

>> I started to stay healthy, but now I\'ve lost weight and recovered from sickness.

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