homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for providing your answers here. I remembered a famous saying about winter by Edith Sitwell - \"winter is the time for comfort, for good food and warmth, for the touch of a friendly hand and for a talk beside the fire: it is time for home.\"
Have a good day and enjoy your holiday!^^
~ T. Kelly^^
In your opinion, which season is the most beautiful? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I think the winter is the most beautiful season.
>> I think winter is the most beautiful season.
We can see the snow and thesr snows will make a good view.
>> We can see snow which gives a beautiful view.
And my birthday is in the winter.
>> And my birthday is in winter.
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