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Being able to vote is imporatant because it causes illusion to people that they are included in the politics.
>> Being able to vote is important because it causes an illusion to people that they are included in politics.
It doesn\'t matter if it is true or not.
>> correct
What is important is that voting makes people believe that they can take a part in making a better world.
>> correct
Voting is also important for the government too.
>> Voting is important for the government, too.
When people directly vote a candidate, it means that they approve of the representative.
>> correct
This causes people to obey and listen to the government more.
>> correct
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