homework

Hello! Good morning!  It\'s a cold day again here. It\'s been raining for more than a week now. There\'s no storm. Just monsoon rain. Anyhow, thanks for your essay.
~T. IRENE~
subject : Describe a game (not about sport) you enjoyed when you were a child.
 The game when I did a child was Rubber band play(i don\'t know how to say in English ;; anyway)
>>> I don\'t know how to say it in English but the toy I used to play with when I was young was the rubber band.
 In elementary, I usually played it with friends after school.
>>> When I was in elementary, I used to play with my friends using this band.
>>> When I was in elementary, my friends and I used to paly with this band.
 I explain how to play.
>>> I\'ll explain how to play with it.
 First, Hang the long rubber on the tree to make circle or square.
>>> First, hang the long rubber on a tree to make circle or square.
 and then step or run on the rubber with a song.
>>> Then to start playing, step on the rubber band while singing a song.
 if you break 1st step, you can play 2nd step.
>>> If you break the first step, you can then go on with the second step.
 Don\'t forget the rubber height will higher when you break each steps.
>>>  Don\'t forget that rubber\'s height will increase as you break each step.
 I enjoyed this game because it played with friends.
>>> I enjoyed this game because I got to play it with friends.
 sometimes we fought, but I feel teamwork and friendship.
>>> Sometimes, we fought because of the game but we were also able to learn and practice teamwork.  It also strengthened out friendship.