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subject : What do you do to get rid of stress?
To get rid of stress, I used to do three ways.
Fist, sleep as I as possible.
Even though It looks simple and static, it effects good.
after waking up from sleep I can forget stress.
Second, singing a song alone in the room.
especially loud and bright song make me more happy.
nowadays, I fall in the song "Love is an open door"
it's easy to sing so I enjoy.
Last way is eat sweet dessert like chocolate cakes, cookies.
(oh! making that desserts are also good idea.)
medically, sweet food decrease 'cortisole' that secrete stress hormone.
So it eases bad stress.
anyhow Writing a essay about get rid of stress give me a stress(just my joke lol).
Always thanks irene correct my nerdy essay ^^
I'm going to eat chocolate cake. bye
강사 첨삭
Hello Kelly! Thanks for answering this question. I would love to share a bar of choclates with you. ^_^
~T. IRENE~
subject : What do you do to get rid of stress?
To get rid of stress, I used to do three ways.
>>> There are three ways on how I get rid of stress.
Fist, sleep as I as possible.
>>> First, I sleep a lot.
>>> First, I sleep as long as possible.
Even though It looks simple and static, it effects good.
>>> Even though it may sound simple and passive, the effect is really good.
after waking up from sleep I can forget stress.
>>> After waking up, I really feel refreshed.
Second, singing a song alone in the room.
>>> Second, singing alone in a room.
especially loud and bright song make me more happy.
>>> Loud and lively music can especially make me a lot happier.
nowadays, I fall in the song \"Love is an open door\"
>>> Nowadays, I have fallen in love with the song, \"Love is an open door.\"
it\'s easy to sing so I enjoy.
>>> It\'s an easy song to sing so I enjoy it.
Last way is eat sweet dessert like chocolate cakes, cookies.
>>> Lastly, I enjoy eating sweet desserts like chocolates, cakes and cookies.
(oh! making that desserts are also good idea.)
>>> Oh! Baking those desserts are a good idea.
medically, sweet food decrease \'cortisole\' that secrete stress hormone.
>>> According to medical science, sweet foods decrease \'cortisole\' that secretes the stress hormone.
So it eases bad stress.
>>> Correct.
anyhow Writing a essay about get rid of stress give me a stress(just my joke lol).
>>> Anyhow, writing an essay about getting rid of stress is stressing me out. (just my joke lol).
Always thanks irene correct my nerdy essay ^^
>>> Thank you very much Irene for correcting my essay.
I\'m going to eat chocolate cake. bye
>>> I\'m now going to eat a slice of chocolate cake. Bye!
~T. IRENE~
subject : What do you do to get rid of stress?
To get rid of stress, I used to do three ways.
>>> There are three ways on how I get rid of stress.
Fist, sleep as I as possible.
>>> First, I sleep a lot.
>>> First, I sleep as long as possible.
Even though It looks simple and static, it effects good.
>>> Even though it may sound simple and passive, the effect is really good.
after waking up from sleep I can forget stress.
>>> After waking up, I really feel refreshed.
Second, singing a song alone in the room.
>>> Second, singing alone in a room.
especially loud and bright song make me more happy.
>>> Loud and lively music can especially make me a lot happier.
nowadays, I fall in the song \"Love is an open door\"
>>> Nowadays, I have fallen in love with the song, \"Love is an open door.\"
it\'s easy to sing so I enjoy.
>>> It\'s an easy song to sing so I enjoy it.
Last way is eat sweet dessert like chocolate cakes, cookies.
>>> Lastly, I enjoy eating sweet desserts like chocolates, cakes and cookies.
(oh! making that desserts are also good idea.)
>>> Oh! Baking those desserts are a good idea.
medically, sweet food decrease \'cortisole\' that secrete stress hormone.
>>> According to medical science, sweet foods decrease \'cortisole\' that secretes the stress hormone.
So it eases bad stress.
>>> Correct.
anyhow Writing a essay about get rid of stress give me a stress(just my joke lol).
>>> Anyhow, writing an essay about getting rid of stress is stressing me out. (just my joke lol).
Always thanks irene correct my nerdy essay ^^
>>> Thank you very much Irene for correcting my essay.
I\'m going to eat chocolate cake. bye
>>> I\'m now going to eat a slice of chocolate cake. Bye!
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