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2018-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

I think baseball and soccer are the most popular hobbies in Korea. Specially, we enjoy the game in the baseball stadium with our families and friends. When we go there, we sing a each team's cheering song to beat the other team. If we hungry in there, we also enjoy chicken, snacks and coke. So, I think watching a baseball game is the good method to reduce our stress.

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I think baseball and soccer are the most popular hobbies in Korea.

>>CORRECT
Specially, we enjoy the game in the baseball stadium with our families and friends.

>>We especially enjoy the baseball game in a stadium with our families and friends.

When we go there, we sing a each team\'s cheering song to beat the other team.

>> When we are there, we sing a song and cheer to our team to beat the other team. 

If we hungry in there, we also enjoy chicken, snacks and coke.

>> If we are hungry, we also enjoy eating chicken, snacks and some coke.

So, I think watching a baseball game is the good method to reduce our stress.

>>So I think, watching a baseball game is a good way to reduce our stress.

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