Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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I think baseball and soccer are the most popular hobbies in Korea.
>>CORRECT
Specially, we enjoy the game in the baseball stadium with our families and friends.
>>We especially enjoy the baseball game in a stadium with our families and friends.
When we go there, we sing a each team\'s cheering song to beat the other team.
>> When we are there, we sing a song and cheer to our team to beat the other team.
If we hungry in there, we also enjoy chicken, snacks and coke.
>> If we are hungry, we also enjoy eating chicken, snacks and some coke.
So, I think watching a baseball game is the good method to reduce our stress.
>>So I think, watching a baseball game is a good way to reduce our stress.
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