Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You are a true lover of stories.
You are familiar with a lot of movies.
I commend you for having a critical eye when it comes to movies.
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, I think our country makes good movies at the same time as making bad movies.
>> Well, I think our country makes good movies as well as bad movies.
For example, <Memories Of Murder>, <The Host> , <Snowpiercer>··· These movies are known of the masterpices of the Korean movie.
>> For example, <Memories Of Murder>, <The Host> and <Snowpiercer> are known as masterpieces of Korean cinema.
But the movies like <Resurrection Of The Little Girl>, <Kimchi Warrior> ··· are known as a garbage of the Korean movie.
>> But movies like <Resurrection Of The Little Girl>and <Kimchi Warrior> are known as garbage among Korean movies.
Like that, no one can\'t ever make a good movie, and also, no one can\'t ever make a bad movie.
>> We can\'t make only good or only bad movies.
When find one very bad movie, I like to see it\'s reviews.
>> When I find a very bad movie, I like to see its reviews.
The jokes of the movie are oftn seeing at the review space.
>> Reviews are very informative regarding the shortcomings of a movie.
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