homework
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: What is your favorite summer food? Share your answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
My favorite summer food is ice cream and water melon.
It is a good to eat ice cream in winter.
So,I often eat the ice cream all month.
And, water melon is also good but it is not sweeter than ice cream.
I like the ice cream eating in all year.
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What is your favorite summer food? Share your answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
My favorite summer food is ice cream and water melon.
>> My favorite summer foods are ice cream and water melon.
It is a good to eat ice cream in winter.
>> Correct.
So,I often eat the ice cream all month.
>> So, I often eat the ice cream all months.
>> I often eat ice cream all throughout the year.
And, water melon is also good but it is not sweeter than ice cream.
>> Correct.
I like the ice cream eating in all year.
>> I like eating ice cream all year round.
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