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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
It sounds like you have a lot of beautiful festivals.
I wish I could witness some of them in the future.
Thank you for sharing.
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, our country has a lot of festivals at each city.
>> Well, our country has a lot of festivals in each city.
There are Rose Festival, Cosmos Festival, Cherry Blossom Festival, etc.
>> We have the Rose Festival, Cosmos Festival, Cherry Blossom Festival and others.
I went to Rose Festival(It is hald at Wonju, that is the area where I live.) when I was young.
>> I went to the Rose Festival held in Wonju, the area where I live, when I was young.
I can\'t remamber exactly, but there were lot\'s of roses.
>> I can\'t remember exactly, but there were lots of roses.
And someone was selling a rose knife (a rose-patterned knife).
>> And someone was selling a rose-patterned knife.
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