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2018-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What do you like about WORLD CUP? ==> The WORLD CUP is a worldwide festival for soccer mania. I liked playing soccer with my colleague but as I am older and older I have to take care my body so I just watch the soccer game. So I will cheer for Korean soccer team in the WORLD CUP. Unfortunately, at the first game with Sweden. our team lost the game. There were several mistakes in the defense and gave the penalty kick to the Sweden. As you know, the German soccer team also lost their first game with Mexico team. Korea, Sweden, Mexico and German belongs to the same group. So we called our team belongs to a death group F. Since Korean soccer team lost the first game, they have to win the next game. Although Korean soccer team will loose the next game, I will cheer our team in the WORLD CUP. They exercised very much for this WORLD CUP, so I hope that they get a good result.

강사 첨삭

James! How are you?

As I have told you, I\'ll cheer this team on, following your lead.

Thanks for sharing!

Let\'s just hope for the best and enjoy the games.

Until the next one!

-Klein-

What do you like about WORLD CUP?
 ==>
 The WORLD CUP is a worldwide festival for soccer mania.

>>Correct
 I liked playing soccer with my colleague but as I am older and older I have to take care my body so I just watch the soccer game.]

>>I liked playing soccer with my colleagues but as I get older and older, I have to take care of my body, so I just watch the soccer game.
 So I will cheer for Korean soccer team in the WORLD CUP.

>>I will cheer for Korean soccer team in the World Cup.
 Unfortunately, at the first game with Sweden. our team lost the game.

>>Unfortunately, at the first game with Sweden, our team lost.
 There were several mistakes in the defense and gave the penalty kick to the Sweden.

>>Correct
 As you know, the German soccer team also lost their first game with Mexico team.

>>As you know, the German soccer team also lost their first game with the Mexican team.
 Korea, Sweden, Mexico and German belongs to the same group.

>>Korea, Sweden, Mexico, and Germany belong to the same group.
 So we called our team belongs to a death group F.

>>So we call it \"Death Group F\".
 Since Korean soccer team lost the first game, they have to win the next game.

>>Correct
 Although Korean soccer team will loose the next game, I will cheer our team in the WORLD CUP.

>>Even though Korean soccer team will lose the next game, I will cheer for our team in the World Cup.
 They exercised very much for this WORLD CUP, so I hope that they get a good result.

>>Correct

OR >>They practiced so hard for this World Cup, so I hope they get a good result.

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