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James! How are you?
As I have told you, I\'ll cheer this team on, following your lead.
Thanks for sharing!
Let\'s just hope for the best and enjoy the games.
Until the next one!
-Klein-
What do you like about WORLD CUP?
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The WORLD CUP is a worldwide festival for soccer mania.
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I liked playing soccer with my colleague but as I am older and older I have to take care my body so I just watch the soccer game.]
>>I liked playing soccer with my colleagues but as I get older and older, I have to take care of my body, so I just watch the soccer game.
So I will cheer for Korean soccer team in the WORLD CUP.
>>I will cheer for Korean soccer team in the World Cup.
Unfortunately, at the first game with Sweden. our team lost the game.
>>Unfortunately, at the first game with Sweden, our team lost.
There were several mistakes in the defense and gave the penalty kick to the Sweden.
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As you know, the German soccer team also lost their first game with Mexico team.
>>As you know, the German soccer team also lost their first game with the Mexican team.
Korea, Sweden, Mexico and German belongs to the same group.
>>Korea, Sweden, Mexico, and Germany belong to the same group.
So we called our team belongs to a death group F.
>>So we call it \"Death Group F\".
Since Korean soccer team lost the first game, they have to win the next game.
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Although Korean soccer team will loose the next game, I will cheer our team in the WORLD CUP.
>>Even though Korean soccer team will lose the next game, I will cheer for our team in the World Cup.
They exercised very much for this WORLD CUP, so I hope that they get a good result.
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OR >>They practiced so hard for this World Cup, so I hope they get a good result.
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