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2018-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When do you say you are a winner? ==> It is very difficult to answer because I didn't think when I was winner. In order to answer your question, I thought that when I was winner but I couldn't find when I was winner. Generally speaking, winners can get some benefit in the competition. In my case, I don't have any experience to get a benefit from competition. When I work in the company, if there is a subject to finish quickly, sometimes I finish it by myself. There are many reasons why I finish it by myself. As you know, we have to keep our working time 40 hours a week. If I don't do that, the item has to be finished among of my team members but my team members are very busy to finish another work. Even though I did extra work but I think that action is for reducing the work of my team members. What I do like that is good for my team. So I think I am winner because I helped my colleague. It is so strange composition today....hhh

강사 첨삭

That\'s really sweet, James!

Very, very sweet!

Thanks for sharing this composition of yours although you thought it was strange. lol

This shows your true personality. I am glad I got to read it. Carry on, my friend!

All the best!

-Klein-

When do you say you are a winner?
 ==>
 It is very difficult to answer because I didn\'t think when I was winner.

>>It is very difficult to answer because I never thought I was a winner.
 In order to answer your question, I thought that when I was winner but I couldn\'t find when I was winner.

>>In order to answer your question, I need to imagine when I was a winner, but I couldn\'t remember when I was a winner.
 Generally speaking, winners can get some benefit in the competition.
>>Correct

In my case, I don\'t have any experience to get a benefit from competition.

>>In my case, I don\'t have any experience to get a benefit from a competition.
 When I work in the company, if there is a subject to finish quickly, sometimes I finish it by myself.
>>Correct

There are many reasons why I finish it by myself.
>>Correct 

As you know, we have to keep our working time 40 hours a week.

>>Correct
 If I don\'t do that, the item has to be finished among of my team members but my team members are very busy to finish another work. 

>>If I don\'t do that, the item has to be finished by my team members, but my team members are very busy to finish another work.

Even though I did extra work but I think that action is for reducing the work of my team members.

>>Even though I did extra work, I think that action is for reducing the work of my team members.
 What I do like that is good for my team.
>>What I do, which is like that, is good for my team. 

So I think I am winner because I helped my colleague.
>>So I think I am a winner because I helped my colleague.
It is so strange composition today....hhh

>>It is a very strange composition today.

>>This composition is so strange today.

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