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That\'s really sweet, James!
Very, very sweet!
Thanks for sharing this composition of yours although you thought it was strange. lol
This shows your true personality. I am glad I got to read it. Carry on, my friend!
All the best!
-Klein-
When do you say you are a winner?
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It is very difficult to answer because I didn\'t think when I was winner.
>>It is very difficult to answer because I never thought I was a winner.
In order to answer your question, I thought that when I was winner but I couldn\'t find when I was winner.
>>In order to answer your question, I need to imagine when I was a winner, but I couldn\'t remember when I was a winner.
Generally speaking, winners can get some benefit in the competition.
>>Correct
In my case, I don\'t have any experience to get a benefit from competition.
>>In my case, I don\'t have any experience to get a benefit from a competition.
When I work in the company, if there is a subject to finish quickly, sometimes I finish it by myself.
>>Correct
There are many reasons why I finish it by myself.
>>Correct
As you know, we have to keep our working time 40 hours a week.
>>Correct
If I don\'t do that, the item has to be finished among of my team members but my team members are very busy to finish another work.
>>If I don\'t do that, the item has to be finished by my team members, but my team members are very busy to finish another work.
Even though I did extra work but I think that action is for reducing the work of my team members.
>>Even though I did extra work, I think that action is for reducing the work of my team members.
What I do like that is good for my team.
>>What I do, which is like that, is good for my team.
So I think I am winner because I helped my colleague.
>>So I think I am a winner because I helped my colleague.
It is so strange composition today....hhh
>>It is a very strange composition today.
>>This composition is so strange today.
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