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2018-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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What can you do now to be successful in the future? I can now learn the skills I need to live the life I want in the futere. I think success is doing what I want and feeling happy. For example, if I want to live happily in a pretty cafe in the future, now I can take the barista process and prepare for the future.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] :)
I hope that you are doing fine today^^

Please check your corrections below.


I can now learn the skills I need to live the life I want in the futere.

>>  What can I do now to be successful in the future is that I need to have the skills to live happily in the future.


I think success is doing what I want and feeling happy.

>> I think success is all about happiness and to do the things what you want.


For example, if I want to live happily in a pretty cafe in the future, now I can take the barista process and prepare for the future.

>> For  an example, if I want to live happily in a pretty cafe in the future, I can make a coffee by myself without needing the help of a barista  and preparing for the success of my future.


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