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If you will be a person who can have everything what will you do first to help a person who is in need?
If I can have everything, I will donate to help a person who is in need.I think providing hospital bills for sick people and living expenses for the poor is the easiest first way to help them.
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If I can have everything, I will donate to help a person who is in need.I think providing hospital bills for sick people and living expenses for the poor is the easiest first way to help them.
>> If I can have everything, I will donate to help a person who is in need. I think providing for the hospital bills for sick people and paying the expenses for someone who does have the capacity to provide is the easiest way to help.
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