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How should parents discipline their children?
It is important for the parents to show a determined and consistent attitude whenever they are disciplining their children. And parents shouldn't be angry at their children or use corporal punishment even if they have done something wrong.
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It is important for the parents to show a determined and consistent attitude whenever they are disciplining their children. And parents shouldn\'t be angry at their children or use corporal punishment even if they have done something wrong.
>>It is important for the parents to show you are determined and that you have a consistent attitude whenever they are disciplining their children. And the parents shouldn\'t be angry with their children or use corporal punishment, even if they have done something wrong.
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