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Thanks for sharing this experience [이름]!

Kindly go over the corrections below.

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~Teacher Shanee^^,

Since I was 13 years old, I have wanted to work abroad.

>>> Correct!

At that time I didn\'t know that exactly which job I have to get for my dream.

>>> At that time, I didn\'t know exactly what job I should have to achieve my dream.

I just wanted to work in U.S.A using English fluently.

>>> I use wanted to work in the U.S.A. and be fluent in English.

Because I thought it looked awesome.^^

>>> Because I thought it would look awesome.^^
 So I always made my choice what is related to overseas and that is why I majored German language.

>>> So I always decided based on that that is why I majored in German Language.

After graduating from a university, I planned to go to Germany but I was given a job offer from Singapore company through my class mate.

>>> After graduating from university, I planned to go to Germany but I received a job offer from a Singaporean company through my classmate.

Although it was not Germany, but I was so excited that finally I could live and work in overseas.

>>> Although it was not Germany, I was so excited that finally I could work overseas.

It felt like I made my dream come true and I didn\'t need to wish other things!

>>> OR: It felt like I made my dream come true and that I wouldn\'t need to wish for other things.

(But this though was turned out false!) 3 months later I flee to Singapore and I really have enjoyed my abroad life for 6 years.

>>>(This turned out false though.) Three months later, I flee to Singapore and really enjoyed my abroad / overseas life for six years.