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Indeed, we get vicarious experiences from such!
Thanks for sharing, James! Please watch another drama with your wife.
Tell me about it on Monday.
Thanks!
-Klein-
What is good about watching dramas?
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Nowadays I like watching drama very much.
>>Nowadays, I like watching dramas very much.
If I have time in the evening, I watch drama with my wife.
>>If I have time in the evening, I watch a drama with my wife.
My wife likes watching american drama like NCIS season.
>>My wife likes watching American dramas like NCIS season/s.
The reason why I watch drama is very simple.
>>The reason that I watch a drama is very simple.
I can reduce stress and have indirect experience.
>>Correct
There are many actors on TV and they do something what I can\'t or don\'t.
>>There are many actors on TV and they do something that I can\'t or don\'t.
When I see it, I feel that my emotion will be better.
>>Correct
Because of that, it makes me happy.
>>Correct
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