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People flock to the capital even though they don\'t have a job or money, hoping that they can get a better opportunity.
>> correct
There are many people living in a capital, which means there are more jobs and chances.
>> There are many people living in a capital city, which means there are more jobs and opportunities.
It is ironic because they flock to capital to earn money but they are still poor.
>> It is ironic because even though they flock to the capital to earn money, they are still poor.
Anyway, most people live in capital to get a nice job.
>> Anyway, most people live in a capital city to get a nice job.
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