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Good afternoon, James!
Are you driving right now? Please drive slowly. lol
Thanks for disclosing this one to me. It must have been hard for you to think about your wrongdoings. Nonetheless, please put your safety first.
Have a good one!
-Klein-
What illegal stuff have you done before?
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In my case, I drive a car and I sometimes park a car in the not allowed place and I like driving a car very fast.
>>In my case, I drive a car and sometimes park it in a forbidden place. Also, I like driving very fast.
At that time, I got an illegal parking sticker and and a speeding ticket and I had to pay a fine for illegal stuff.
>>At that time, I got an illegal parking sticker and a speeding ticket, so I had to pay a fine.
That\'s all that I did illegal stuff.
>>That\'s the only illegal stuff I have done.
I always try to keep the law except driving a car.
>>I always try to keep the law except when driving a car.
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