homework
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How often do you go to an amusement [이름]? What is your favorite amusement [이름] ride? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I go to the amusement [이름] or water [이름] 3 or 4 times a year.
And my favorite amuesment [이름] is Ever Land.
I like all ride in Ever Land.
But I can't ride roller coaster or viking and dropping because it is so scared.
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How often do you go to an amusement [이름]? What is your favorite amusement [이름] ride? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I go to the amusement [이름] or water [이름] 3 or 4 times a year.
>> Correct.
And my favorite amuesment [이름] is Ever Land.
>> Correct.
I like all ride in Ever Land.
>> I like all the rides in Ever Land.
But I can\'t ride roller coaster or viking and dropping because it is so scared.
>> But I can\'t ride the roller coaster, the Viking, and gyro drop because they are so scary.
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