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2018-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

학생이 쓴 원문

Please use the following words in sentences: 1. confident Be confident. Love yourself. 2. cooperate I want to finish the job until its deadline, so I should cooperate with another departments. 3. fluent I would be fluent if only I keep studying english. 4. previous Go back to previous episode. I didn't watch it yet. 5. recently Retail stores gets bankrupt recently in Korea. 6. former It was good to run a retail store when it's former, but now it's very hard due to rental fee.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jake. Happy Monday to you! How\'s your day going? I hope everything is going well.
Thank you very much for sending in your homework. Keep it up.
Please take note of the corrections.
I will talk to you later.
T. Gracelyn

1. confident
Be confident. Love yourself.
>>correct
2. cooperate
I want to finish the job until its deadline, so I should cooperate with another departments.
>>I want to finish the job before its deadline so I should cooperate with other departments.
3. fluent
I would be fluent if only I keep studying English.
>>correct
4. previous
Go back to previous episode. I didn\'t watch it yet.
>>correct
5. recently
Retail stores gets bankrupt recently in Korea.
>>Recently, retail stores in Korea are going bankrupt.
6. former 
It was good to run a retail store when it\'s former, but now it\'s very hard due to rental fee.
>>correct

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