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2018-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think if the citizens will protect the law, than the city will be very safe place to live. Yea. that's it. Well, there can be another way to protect the citizens like place more security camera, organize civil crime prevention... But I think the first way is the best way. I know, it will be very hard to hope all the citizens to protect the law. But that's not going to be bad to hope.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I hope that people would just follow the rules too.

It may seem impossible to achieve but it can be done.

You represent your generation.

Be an instrument for change.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think if the citizens will protect the law, than the city will be very safe place to live.
>> I think if the citizens will protect the law, then, the city will be a very safe place to live in.
Yea. that\'s it.
>> Yes. That\'s it.
Well, there can be another way to protect the citizens like place more security camera, organize civil crime prevention...
>> Well, there can be another way to protect the citizens like placing more security cameras, organizing civil crime prevention and others.
But I think the first way is the best way.
>> Correct
I know, it will be very hard to hope all the citizens to protect the law.
>> I know, it will be very hard to hope that all the citizens protect the law.
But that\'s not going to be bad to hope.

>>  But there\'s nothing wrong with hoping.

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