Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I hope that people would just follow the rules too.
It may seem impossible to achieve but it can be done.
You represent your generation.
Be an instrument for change.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think if the citizens will protect the law, than the city will be very safe place to live.
>> I think if the citizens will protect the law, then, the city will be a very safe place to live in.
Yea. that\'s it.
>> Yes. That\'s it.
Well, there can be another way to protect the citizens like place more security camera, organize civil crime prevention...
>> Well, there can be another way to protect the citizens like placing more security cameras, organizing civil crime prevention and others.
But I think the first way is the best way.
>> Correct
I know, it will be very hard to hope all the citizens to protect the law.
>> I know, it will be very hard to hope that all the citizens protect the law.
But that\'s not going to be bad to hope.
>> But there\'s nothing wrong with hoping.
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