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I think the risk is wasting time without any try in our life. Thesedays, we live in city not in a dangerous jungle.
So, we have to do something meaningful work or activities for ourselves. If we awalys do the something by other's intention,
we will meet the very regretful last day. So, I would like to try change and challenge in the company and in my life. I think that I am type who enjoy change. Because I think that life is journey.
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Good afternoon [이름]! Thank you for answering this homework! :) I appreciate it.
~T. IRENE~
I think the risk is wasting time without any try in our life.
>>> I think a risk is just a waste if we don\'t try it.
These days, we live in city not in a dangerous jungle.
>>> These days, we live in the city and not in a dangerous jungle.
So, we have to do something meaningful work or activities for ourselves.
>>> So we need to do some meaningful activities or work for ourselves.
If we awalys do the something by other\'s intention, we will meet the very regretful last day.
>>> If we always do things to satisfy others, we will live a regretful life.
So, I would like to try change and challenge in the company and in my life.
>>> So, I would like to try some changes and challenges in my work or life.
I think that I am type who enjoy change.
>>> I think I\'m the type of guy who loves changes.
Because I think that life is journey.
>>> This is because I believe that life is a journey.
~T. IRENE~
I think the risk is wasting time without any try in our life.
>>> I think a risk is just a waste if we don\'t try it.
These days, we live in city not in a dangerous jungle.
>>> These days, we live in the city and not in a dangerous jungle.
So, we have to do something meaningful work or activities for ourselves.
>>> So we need to do some meaningful activities or work for ourselves.
If we awalys do the something by other\'s intention, we will meet the very regretful last day.
>>> If we always do things to satisfy others, we will live a regretful life.
So, I would like to try change and challenge in the company and in my life.
>>> So, I would like to try some changes and challenges in my work or life.
I think that I am type who enjoy change.
>>> I think I\'m the type of guy who loves changes.
Because I think that life is journey.
>>> This is because I believe that life is a journey.
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