Homework
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Hi, teacher Mia!
I was glad to meet you again.
Also I hope you feel better and everything will be fine.
See you soon.
HW : How often do you see violence in your country?
I guess I see that problem every single day. Whenever I watch the news, people who are in the news look like to be angry about something. It could be any type of violence. If there are woman and man in some news, it is almost sexual violence. Any case, it is not right to someone uses violence on a person. I seriously hope that perpetrator stops to cause violence.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I\'m also happy to talk to you again.
I believe everything will be fine as days go by.
Thank you for answering the question.
See you tonight.
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
I guess I see that problem every single day. Whenever I watch the news, people who are in the news look like to be angry about something. It could be any type of violence. If there are woman and man in some news, it is almost sexual violence. Any case, it is not right to someone uses violence on a person. I seriously hope that perpetrator stops to cause violence.
>> I guess I see that problem every single day. Whenever I watch the news, people always look angry about something or it could be any type of violence. If there are woman and man in some news, it is almost sexual violence. In any case, it is not right for someone to use violence on a person. I seriously hope perpetrators stop causing violence.
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