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Q: Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree?
A: Yes all most I agree but in my side isn't agree
I don't have a university degree because I dropped when I was university. after dropped the degree I worked soon. I was changed difference job and try to get a career for my job.
Therefore, It doesn't matter having a good university degree in my side, life.
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>>Yes, I almost agree.
I don\'t have a university degree because I dropped when I was university.
I don\'t have a university degree because I dropped when I was university.
>>I don\'t have a university degree because I dropped when I was a university student.
after dropped the degree I worked soon.
>>After I dropped, I worked.
I was changed difference job and try to get a career for my job.
>>I changed my job several times and I tried to get a job that I really want.
Therefore, It doesn\'t matter having a good university degree in my side, life.
Therefore, It doesn\'t matter having a good university degree in my side, life.
>>Therefore, I don\'t agree that a good university degree guarantees people a good job.
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