homework
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: What motivates you to do things? What do you think is the best motivator to succeed? What do you do when you feel demotivated? What is a good way to motivate others?
'sense of accomplishment' is the best motivator to me.
good memory of past accomplishment make me more passionate and active.
But generally 'Money' is the best motivator to succeed for people.
because people like money and can do many things through money.
If I feel demotivate something, I used to take a rest for a while.
when I became calm, I expect nice my appearance.
I think enough rest is good way to motivate others even the situation allow.
For example, when I was college, I don't want to study the major anymore. so, I decided to study my department until this semester.
but In the vacation I took a full rest, and I can study continue.
If you do, you can overcome kind of a slump.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kelly! Thank you for sending me your composition! Have a great day!
~T. Irene~
ESSAY: What motivates you to do things? What do you think is the best motivator to succeed? What do you do when you feel demotivated? What is a good way to motivate others?
\'sense of accomplishment\' is the best motivator to me.
>>> A \'sense of accomplishment\' is the best motivator for me.
good memory of past accomplishment make me more passionate and active.
>>> A good memory of a past accomplishment makes me more passionate and active.
But generally \'Money\' is the best motivator to succeed for people.
>>> Generally, \'Money\' is the best motivator to succeed for most people.
because people like money and can do many things through money.
>>> This is because people like money and can do many things through money.
If I feel demotivate something, I used to take a rest for a while.
>>> When I feel demotivated about something, I take a rest for a while.
when I became calm, I expect nice my appearance.
>>> When I have calmed down, I think nice thoughts with my appearance.
I think enough rest is good way to motivate others even the situation allow.
>>> I think enough rest is a good way to motivate ourselves even if the situation does not allow it.
For example, when I was college, I don\'t want to study the major anymore.
>>> For example, when I was college, I didn\'t want to study the major subjects anymore.
so, I decided to study my department until this semester.
>>> So, I decided to delay my study this semester.
but In the vacation I took a full rest, and I can study continue.
>>> During my vacation, I took a full rest and studied continuously.
If you do, you can overcome kind of a slump.
>>> If you do this, you can overcome the feeling of experiencing a slump.
~T. Irene~
ESSAY: What motivates you to do things? What do you think is the best motivator to succeed? What do you do when you feel demotivated? What is a good way to motivate others?
\'sense of accomplishment\' is the best motivator to me.
>>> A \'sense of accomplishment\' is the best motivator for me.
good memory of past accomplishment make me more passionate and active.
>>> A good memory of a past accomplishment makes me more passionate and active.
But generally \'Money\' is the best motivator to succeed for people.
>>> Generally, \'Money\' is the best motivator to succeed for most people.
because people like money and can do many things through money.
>>> This is because people like money and can do many things through money.
If I feel demotivate something, I used to take a rest for a while.
>>> When I feel demotivated about something, I take a rest for a while.
when I became calm, I expect nice my appearance.
>>> When I have calmed down, I think nice thoughts with my appearance.
I think enough rest is good way to motivate others even the situation allow.
>>> I think enough rest is a good way to motivate ourselves even if the situation does not allow it.
For example, when I was college, I don\'t want to study the major anymore.
>>> For example, when I was college, I didn\'t want to study the major subjects anymore.
so, I decided to study my department until this semester.
>>> So, I decided to delay my study this semester.
but In the vacation I took a full rest, and I can study continue.
>>> During my vacation, I took a full rest and studied continuously.
If you do, you can overcome kind of a slump.
>>> If you do this, you can overcome the feeling of experiencing a slump.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.