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Q: Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. What is your opinion?
A: I think it isn't help to homeless people.
If they take some money they doesn't need work anymore just staying until get to some money from people.
They never get over their life
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>>I think it isn\'t helpful for homeless people.
If they take some money they doesn\'t need work anymore just staying until get to some money from people.
If they take some money they doesn\'t need work anymore just staying until get to some money from people.
>>I they will get money, they will not work anymore. They will get used to begging/asking money from people.
They never get over their life.
They never get over their life.
>>correct
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