homework

Hi Eunice!

Your sentences are very descriptive and detailed.

I like how you expressed your thoughts in simple form.

Keep it up!

~~ Teacher Sharon
I can connect people that I want to talk anytime and anywhere.

>> I can contact people whom I want to talk to anytime and anywhere.
I can use the internet to find some information.

>> I can surf the Internet to find some information using my phone.
I can watch the moives if I save it in the phone.

>> I can watch movies if I save them on my phone.
I can study English or chinese with application in the phone.

>> I can study English or Chinese using the applications on my phone.
I can listen to music anytime and anywhere.

>> Correct
Electromagnetic waves hurts my health.

>> Electromagnetic waves are dangerous to my health.
It hurts my eyesight.

>>  It hurts my vision.
Dialogues are decreased with people and it makes communication breakdown.

>> Opportunities for conversations are lessened and communications are weakened.
We have some possibility to be addictive to it and feel nervous if we don\'t have it on our hand.

>> There is a possibility to be addicted to it and feel nervous if we don\'t have it in our hands.
We have to pay a lot of money to buy and use it.

>> Correct