Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Well...my family usally travel by car.
My mom said that the money we had for my family trip changed every time.
And...is there any travel that is not tired?
When I come back home from travling, I feel like there is no more tiring thing than traveing.
Um...What do I have to write here now...?
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
We had a nice time in class today.
I hope we have more classes like that.
I\'ll call you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well...my family usally travel by car.
>> My family usually travels by car.
My mom said that the money we had for my family trip changed every time.
>> My mom says that the amount of money we spend on trips changes every time.
And...is there any travel that is not tired?
>> Is there any kind of travel that is not tiring?
When I come back home from travling, I feel like there is no more tiring thing than traveling.
>> Whenever I come home from travelling, I feel really tired.
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