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2018-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I don't think there is enough vaction. Students go to school everday except for weekends and holidays. It will be nice to give tham more time to rest. And we don't only rest and hang out with friends at vacation. We experience lot of things at vaction such as traveling abroad or going to variety of museams. Schools always say students have to experience a lot of things and learn from it. So I personaly think it is good to have more vacation days.

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Cheers!

Jean




I don\'t think there is enough vaction.

>> I don\'t think students have enough vacation.


Students go to school everday except for weekends and holidays.

>> correct


 It will be nice to give tham more time to rest.

>> It would be nice to give them more time to rest.


And we don\'t only rest and hang out with friends at vacation.

>> Besides, we don\'t rest and hang out with friends only during vacation.


We experience lot of things at vaction such as traveling abroad or going to variety of museams.

>> We experience at lot of things during vacation such as traveling abroad or going to a variety of museums.


Schools always say students have to experience a lot of things and learn from it.

>> Schools always say that students have to experience many things and learn from them.


So I personaly think it is good to have more vacation days.

>> correct

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