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I don\'t think there is enough vaction.
>> I don\'t think students have enough vacation.
Students go to school everday except for weekends and holidays.
>> correct
It will be nice to give tham more time to rest.
>> It would be nice to give them more time to rest.
And we don\'t only rest and hang out with friends at vacation.
>> Besides, we don\'t rest and hang out with friends only during vacation.
We experience lot of things at vaction such as traveling abroad or going to variety of museams.
>> We experience at lot of things during vacation such as traveling abroad or going to a variety of museums.
Schools always say students have to experience a lot of things and learn from it.
>> Schools always say that students have to experience many things and learn from them.
So I personaly think it is good to have more vacation days.
>> correct
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