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2018-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi. good afternoon It was a great today Have a nice weekeend. ^^ WHAT ARE THE CAUSES OF LIPOMA? -->The cause of lipoma has not been identified 1. My aunt has a son and two daughters. 2. The naughty boy took a stone and threw it at a bird 3.The fisherman is poor and honest. 4. We hailed a taxi but the driver did not see us. 5.The street musician played his music loud but nobody listened to him. 6. He ran very fast in the race but slipped and fell. 7. I went to the grocery store but closed. 8. He opened his wallet and took out some money. 9. He went to the plum tree and plucked a few plums. 10. The street musician played his music loud but nobody listened to him.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [Name]! Thank you very much for sending in your homework. 
I know that you will be a good English speaker soon because of your determination.
T. Gracelyn

1. My aunt has a son and two daughters.
>>correct
2. The naughty boy took a stone and threw it at a bird.
>>correct
3.The fisherman is poor and honest.
>>correct
4. We hailed a taxi but the driver did not see us.
>>correct
5.The street musician played his music loud but nobody listened to him. 
>>correct
6. He ran very fast in the race but slipped and fell.
>>correct
7. I went to the grocery store but closed.
>>I went to the grocery store but it was closed.
8. He opened his wallet and took out some money.
>>correct
9. He went to the plum tree and plucked a few plums.
>>correct
10. The street musician played his music loud but nobody listened to him.
>>correct

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