Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Well...er... parents should teach their children safety tips.
And the children should follow the rules.
Of course, adults have to follow the rules too.
Er...I'm very sorry, I have no idea of what I have to write here today.
And that means I will this writing.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Please tell me the specific question that you need explained.
We can discuss and you can try to write in moredetail again.
Let\'s talk on Monday.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well...er... parents should teach their children safety tips.
>> Parents should share safety tips to their children.
And the children should follow the rules.
>> Correct
Of course, adults have to follow the rules too.
>> Correct
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