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2018-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I obtain real satisfaction at vacation when I see pictures of where I went today. It feels like I saw and experienced a lot when I see pictures. It is also kind of fun to look back at the places. And I feel satisfaction when I go to bed. I feel tired and s[이름]py It feels like I had a satisfying day.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

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Cheers!
Jean

I obtain real satisfaction at vacation when I see pictures of where I went today.

>> I obtain real satisfaction on a vacation when I see today the pictures of where I went.

It feels like I saw and experienced a lot when I see pictures.

>> It feels like I saw and experienced a lot when I see the photos.

It is also kind of fun to look back at the places. And I feel satisfaction when I go to bed.

>> It is also kind of fun to look back at the places I visited and I feel a sense of satisfaction when I go to bed.

I feel tired and s[이름]py It feels like I had a satisfying day.

>> I feel tired and s[이름]py. It feels like I had a satisfying day.

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