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2018-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How do you prepare for work? How do you stay punctual? How much do you value your time? ==> I always check what I do in the next day before closing the day. If I don't do that, I forget several items what I do. That kinds of action, it gives me much help when I work. I make plans what I have to do in a day and I try to finish those works. Nowadays Working and life balance is very important thing who works in the company. The company workers want to spend the evening time with their family. I also want to spend evening time with my family. So I try to keep my working time in the company and I try to make my time valuable.

강사 첨삭

Time is precious! Thank you for sharing this with me.

Let\'s spend more time with our loved ones.

Enjoy your day!

-Klein-

How do you prepare for work?
How do you stay punctual?
How much do you value your time?
 ==>
I always check what I do in the next day before closing the day.

>>Correct
If I don\'t do that, I forget several items what I do.

>>If I don\'t do that, I forget several items.
That kinds of action, it gives me much help when I work.
>>That kind of action gives me much help when I work. 

I make plans what I have to do in a day and I try to finish those works.
>>I make plans on what I have to do in a day and try to finish them. 

Nowadays Working and life balance is very important thing who works in the company.
>>Nowadays, work and life balance is very a very important thing for someone who works in a company. 

The company workers want to spend the evening time with their family.
>>Correct 

I also want to spend evening time with my family.
>>Correct 

So I try to keep my working time in the company and I try to make my time valuable.

>>Correct

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