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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Time is precious! Thank you for sharing this with me.
Let\'s spend more time with our loved ones.
Enjoy your day!
-Klein-
How do you prepare for work?
How do you stay punctual?
How much do you value your time?
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I always check what I do in the next day before closing the day.
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If I don\'t do that, I forget several items what I do.
>>If I don\'t do that, I forget several items.
That kinds of action, it gives me much help when I work.
>>That kind of action gives me much help when I work.
I make plans what I have to do in a day and I try to finish those works.
>>I make plans on what I have to do in a day and try to finish them.
Nowadays Working and life balance is very important thing who works in the company.
>>Nowadays, work and life balance is very a very important thing for someone who works in a company.
The company workers want to spend the evening time with their family.
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I also want to spend evening time with my family.
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So I try to keep my working time in the company and I try to make my time valuable.
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