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I worked in accountant office for 3 years.
>> I\'ve been working in an accounting firm for 3 years.
Before applying the company, I prepared a certificate related to accounting since I am not a accountant, so in order to pick me up, I had to be qualified with accounting.
>> In order for me to become qualified and get hired, before I applied for a job at the company, I prepared a certificate related to accounting as I\'m not an accountant.
By working the company, I had to usually overwork three or four days a week, however, there wasn\'t overtime allowance.
>> Ever since I started working at the company, I had to usually work overtime without pay for at least 3 or 4 days a week.
I seemed to have become a workaholic. In the time where I get used to my job, I heard that I work twice as fast as others by boss and then I decided to discuss my salary with her.
>> I seemed to have become a workaholic. After working for some time at the company, I heard from my boss that I work twice as fast as other employees that\'s why I decided to discuss my salary with her.
I asked my boss for a raise but she didn\'t give me the raise I was hoping for.
>> I asked my boss for a raise but she didn\'t give me one.
After that event, I was thinking about quitting my job for a long time and finally resigned. It was not easy to change my jobs suddenly, but it\'s not good enough for me to enjoy my life.
>> For quite some time after the event, I thought about quitting my job. It\'s not easy to change jobs suddenly but my pay is not enough to enjoy my life.
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