Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, for me, I don't think I'm beautiful.
When I look at the mirror, I can feel my eyes are screaming.
They do not want to look at my face.
I looked my face 13years, and still can't be used to my face.
Then how would my face look to someone else?
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I think that you are a confident person.
You should never change.
You are a beautiful child.
That\'s all that matters.
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, for me, I don\'t think I\'m beautiful.
>> Correct
When I look at the mirror, I can feel my eyes are screaming.
>> When I look in the mirror, I can feel my eyes are screaming.
They do not want to look at my face.
>> Correct
I looked my face 13years, and still can\'t be used to my face.
>> I have been looking at my face for 13 years and I still can\'t get used to it.
Then how would my face look to someone else?
>> Correct
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