Homework
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Q. Do you like meeting new people?
A. Yes, I do. Always it is exciting for me to meeting new people.
Especially, the foreigners I met while traveling helped me to see the wider world and get deeper thought.
I'm looking forward to meeting new people during working holidays in Australia.
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Hello!
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Cheers!
Jean
Q. Do you like meeting new people?
A. Yes, I do. Always it is exciting for me to meeting new people.
Especially, the foreigners I met while traveling helped me to see the wider world and get deeper thought.
>> Yes, I do. I always feel excited when I meet new people. I especially like the foreigners whom I met abroad as they helped me see a different world and developed a more profound mind.
I\'m looking forward to meeting new people during working holidays in Australia.
>> I\'m looking forward to meeting new people during my working holiday in Australia.
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