homework

2018-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Is it important to help other people? Why or why not? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. I will help other people. Because,they hope I help and they are pathetic. And,I can feel tight after I help. So,I will help other people.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I hope that you will continue to lend your hand to those who are in need. Stay nice all the time.^^

~T. Kelly^^

Is it important to help other people? Why or why not? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.

I will help other people.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> I like helping other people.

Because,they hope I help and they are pathetic.

>> Did you mean: Because they need my help so I am willing to offer it to them because they are pitiful.

And,I can feel tight after I help.

>> And I feel good after helping others.

So,I will help other people.
>> Correct.

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