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2018-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I think that I didn't make any plan for my lfie these days because It's very difficult having a free time. I just work and taking care of my two sons. I am getting lazy for developing my personal ability or goal. First of all, I believe that I need to set up samll plan near future like one level up of english skill. I believe I am woking at company in 5 years. However, I am not sure in 10 years myself. I think I have to find out my own business at that time. So, I am considering and studying how to make the money for living. I would like to be a independent person and work until i want to do. If I work in company, my life is dependent by company status.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Thank you for finding time to make your homework. You did a great job. I hope you\'ll be able to fulfill your wish/plan.

~T. Lynn   

I think that I didn\'t make any plan for my lfie these days because It\'s very difficult having a free time.

>> I think that I didn\'t make any plans for my life these days because It\'s very difficult to have a free time.
 I just work and taking care of my two sons.

>> I just work and take care of my two sons.

I am getting lazy for developing my personal ability or goal.

>> I am getting lazy in developing my personal ability or goal.

First of all, I believe that I need to set up samll plan near future like one level up of english skill.

>> First of all, I believe that I need to make short term plans like leveling up my English skills.

I believe I am woking at company in 5 years.

>> I believe I can work for my current company for 5 years.

However, I am not sure in 10 years myself.

>> However, I\'m not sure I\'ll still be working here for 10 years.

 I think I have to find out my own business at that time.

>> I think I have to put up my own business at that time.

So, I am considering and studying how to make the money for living.

>> So, I am considering and studying how to make more money.

I would like to be a independent person and work until i want to do.

>> I would like to be an independent person and work until I want to.

If I work in company, my life is dependent by company status.

>> If I work in a company, my life is dependent to the company policies/rules.

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