homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HI.^^*
Thnak you so much.^^
Today is hot and sticky.
but I'll do my best to improve my English skills.
Have a fantastic day.
Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. What is your opinion?
In my opinion, I oppose a dangerous sports.
That's why it can be linked to life.
we must do exercise according to our physical condition.
Excessive exercise is bad for our health and has many side effects.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]! Thank you for the effort. ^^
Anyway, I think the weather is unpredictable in your place right now so you should take care of yourself.
I will talk to you tomorrow. ^^
T. Gracelyn
>>In my opinion, I think dangerous sports should be banned.
That\'s why it can be linked to life.
That\'s why it can be linked to life.
>>correct
We must do exercise according to our physical condition.
We must do exercise according to our physical condition.
>>correct
Excessive exercise is bad for our health and has many side effects.
Excessive exercise is bad for our health and has many side effects.
>>correct
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