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If I were an instrument, I think I will be a trumbone.
>> If I were an instrument, I think I will be a trombone.
Trumbones have large range of sound.
>> Trombones have a large range of sound.
Sometimes it can be soft, and other times, it can be powerful.
>> It can be soft sometimes and can be powerful at other times.
I also like how the sound can be dark and mesterious in low notes and brilliant and playful in high notes.
>> I also like how the sound can be dark and mysterious in low tones while brilliant and playful in high tones.
I think I can change my mood well depending on the kind of siituation I\'m in. Which is why I will be a trumbone if I were an instrument.
>> I think I can change my mood well depending on the kind of siituation I\'m in, which is why I will be a trombone if I were an instrument.
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