Homework
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What would make you skip your classes with me?
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I always set the alarm at 5:30 AM.
Today, I woke up at 5:30 AM in the morning with alarm.
After I turn off the alarm, I went to bed again.
My wife woke me up at 6 o'clock.
I slept again and I couldn't wake up until at 6:00 AM.
Nowadays I am very tired, so I feel that I need to take a rest.
Because of that, I went to bed again but I didn't have any plan to sleep long time.
I was surprised very much and I turned on the computer.
After joining the class, I told you about my situation.
It's the reason why I have to skip today's class.
강사 첨삭
Where are you now, James? You must be having a wonderful time. Thanks for still doing your homework although you\'re having your business trip. Take it easy there! See you tomorrow!
What would make you skip your classes with me?
I always set the alarm at 5:30 AM.
>>Correct
OR >> I always set the alarm at 5:30 in the morning.
Today, I woke up at 5:30 AM in the morning with alarm.
Today, I woke up at 5:30 AM in the morning with alarm.
>> The alarm woke me up today at 5:30 in the morning.
>> I managed to wake up today at 5:30 AM upon hearing the alarm.
>> I woke up today at 5:30 in the morning upon hearing the alarm.
After I turn off the alarm, I went to bed again.
After I turn off the alarm, I went to bed again.
>> After turning off the alarm, I went to bed again.
>> I went to bed again after turning off the alarm.
>> I went back to bed after turning off the alarm.
My wife woke me up at 6 o\'clock.
My wife woke me up at 6 o\'clock.
>>Correct
OR >> My wife woke me up a little later at 6 AM.
I slept again and I couldn\'t wake up until at 6:00 AM.
>> I overslept after going back to bed and woke up only at 6 AM.
Nowadays I am very tired, so I feel that I need to take a rest.
Nowadays I am very tired, so I feel that I need to take a rest.
>> I\'ve been very tired these days, so I feel the need for more rest.
>> I\'ve been very tired these days and I feel like I need more rest.
>> I\'ve been feeling exhausted the past days and I think I need more rest.
Because of that, I went to bed again but I didn\'t have any plan to sleep long time.
>> As a result, I went to bed again but I wasn\'t planning on sleeping longer.
>> As a result, I went back to sleep but I had no intention of sleeping longer.
I was surprised very much and I turned on the computer.
I was surprised very much and I turned on the computer.
>> I was quite surprised and immediately turned on the computer.
>> I was taken aback and I immediately turned on the computer.
After joining the class, I told you about my situation.
After joining the class, I told you about my situation.
>> I told you about what happened while having the class.
It\'s the reason why I have to skip today\'s class.
It\'s the reason why I have to skip today\'s class.
>> That was the reason that I had to skip today\'s class.
>> To sum it all up, that was the reason why I had to skip today\'s class.
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