homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HI ^^ good afternoon.
I was impressed by your meaningful words.
Thank you for the valuable words.^^
Have a wonderful day.
Describe your most meaningful achievements and how they relate to your future goals.
My original dream was not a nurse but a teacher.
But I think I can achieve my dream again.
My most meaningful achievement is the acquisition of the CPR instructor certificate.
I'm so happy that I can save the patient and deliver this important thing to a lot of people.
Any way,There are many types of CPR certifications.
I'm preparing to get another BLS CPR certificate.
I will be a person who study a lot to save a life and spread this knowledge to many people.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]. Thank you once again for the effort.
You never fail to impress me. Keep it up!
I will talk to you tomorrow.
T. Gracelyn
My original dream was not a nurse but a teacher.
>>correct
But I think I can achieve my dream again.
>>correct
My most meaningful achievement is the acquisition of the CPR instructor certificate.
My most meaningful achievement is the acquisition of the CPR instructor certificate.
>>correct
I\'m so happy that I can save the patient and deliver this important thing to a lot of people.
I\'m so happy that I can save the patient and deliver this important thing to a lot of people.
>>correct
Anyway, there are many types of CPR certifications.
Anyway, there are many types of CPR certifications.
>>correct
I\'m preparing to get another BLS CPR certificate.
I\'m preparing to get another BLS CPR certificate.
>>correct
I will be a person who study a lot to save a life and spread this knowledge to many people.
I will be a person who study a lot to save a life and spread this knowledge to many people.
>>I am a person who studies a lot to save lives and spread knowledge to many people.
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