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2018-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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I think that dangerous sports should be offically banned and managed by the goverment. Only persons who quallified to paly dangerous sports should be enjoy it. If there is no preper a ban on dangerous sports, many accidents will be happened.

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Hello there Ms. [이름]. Great Monday to you!
Thank you once again for patiently doing your homework. Keep it up!
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T. Gracelyn

I think that dangerous sports should be offically banned and managed by the goverment.
>>I think that dangerous sports should be officially banned by the government.
Only persons who quallified to paly dangerous sports should be enjoy it.
>>People who are only qualified to play dangerous sports should enjoy it.
If there is no preper a ban on dangerous sports, many accidents will be happened.
>>If there will be no proper policies for dangerous sports, many accidents will happen.

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