homework
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Essay Writing:
What is your favorite movie/book character? Describe him/her as detailed as you can.
I like Marvel's charecters and especially Hulk is my favorite one. He is a normal scientist but when he gets threat from anything then he turns out extremely strong physical ability. I think he is the strongest one of the Marvel heroes. In the story, he concerns about his power because when he turns to Hulk then he couldn't control himself and even he never gets hurt until he's exhausted. So he decided to disapear from his acquaintances. I like this point. He shows that super power could damage to the society and it causes a lot of things to think. So, I was deeply interested in his movie and I like the hero.
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>>I like Marvel characters especially Hulk.
He is a normal scientist but when he gets threat from anything then he turns out extremely strong physical ability.
>>He is a normal scientist but when he gets angry, he turns out to be extremely strong.
I think he is the strongest one of the Marvel heroes.
>>I think he is the strongest among the Marvel heroes.
In the story, he concerns about his power because when he turns to Hulk then he couldn\'t control himself and even he never gets hurt until he\'s exhausted.
>>In the story, he is worried about his power because when he turns to Hulk, he couldn\'t control himself and he never gets hurt until he is exhausted.
So he decided to disapear from his acquaintances.
>>So he decided to disappear from his acquaintances.
I like this point.
>>correct
He shows that super power could damage to the society and it causes a lot of things to think.
>>He shows that super power could damage the society and it causes a lot of problems.
So, I was deeply interested in his movie and I like the hero.
>>correct
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