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2018-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Well...I never left the tip at the restaurant. And I think leaving the tip will be good for the employees...I think... But I don't think it is that important... I don't know why I think so but giving the tip isn't that important to me. Maybe someday, I think giving the tip is important.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

It\'s good for you to explore new ideas that are not familiar to you.

Thank you for giving the effort to come up with this composition.

Let\'s talk more about this in class.

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well...I never left the tip at the restaurant.
>> I have never tried leaving a tip at a restaurant.
And I think leaving the tip will be good for the employees...I think...
>> I think leaving a tip is good for employees.
But I don\'t think it is that important...
>> Correct
I don\'t know why I think so but giving the tip isn\'t that important to me.
>> I don\'t know why I think so but leaving a tip isn\'t that important to me.
Maybe someday, I think giving the tip is important.

>> Maybe someday, I would also think that giving a tip is important. 

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