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2018-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Do you often ask for favors? When? Please explain. => I often do mother for waking me up whenever I go to the university. Despite I set a morning bell, I can't listen to it. So my mother open a door of my room and say "Get up!". Then, I get up and have a breakfast. Also, I often ask for favor when I visit a restaurant. I don't have any hate foods and ingredients. But I effort to not eat the pickled cucumber and pickled radish. It is like stereotype, I heard that many food companies make them dirtily and they even do using rotten things, on TV. So when I order a menu, I ask a clerk for serving dishes expecting pickles. If I forget the asking, they will be a waste. But ironically, I like jalapeno because of spicy tasting.

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Hello [이름],

Thank you so much for today’s note.

I appreciate it a lot!

Have a great day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

HOMEWORK: Do you often ask for favors? When? Please explain.

I often do mother for waking me up whenever I go to the university.

>>I often thank my mother for waking me up whenever I go to the university.

 Despite I set a morning bell, I can\'t listen to it.

>>In spite of setting the alarm each morning, I still can\'t hear it.

 So my mother open a door of my room and say \"Get up!\".

>>So, my mother often opens the door of my room and tells me to get up.

Then, I get up and have a breakfast.

>>Only then, do I get up and have breakfast.

Also, I often ask for favor when I visit a restaurant.

>>Also, I often ask for favors when I visit a restaurant.

I don\'t have any hate foods and ingredients.

>>I don\'t have any allergies to foods or other ingredients.

But I effort to not eat the pickled cucumber and pickled radish.

>>But I always make an effort to not eat a pickled cucumber and a pickled radish.

 It is like stereotype, I heard that many food companies make them dirtily and they even do using rotten things, on TV.

>>It is like having a prejudice about something. I heard on TV that many food companies prepare them in unhygienic conditions, and they even use low quality or rotting ingredients.

So when I order a menu, I ask a clerk for serving dishes expecting pickles.

>>So when I order from the menu, I usually ask the server for a serving of pickles on a dish.

 If I forget the asking, they will be a waste.

>>If I forget to ask, they will be wasted.

But ironically, I like jalapeno because of spicy tasting.

>>But ironically, I like jalapenos because of the spicy taste.

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