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HOMEWORK: Do you often ask for favors? When? Please explain.
I often do mother for waking me up whenever I go to the university.
>>I often thank my mother for waking me up whenever I go to the university.
Despite I set a morning bell, I can\'t listen to it.
>>In spite of setting the alarm each morning, I still can\'t hear it.
So my mother open a door of my room and say \"Get up!\".
>>So, my mother often opens the door of my room and tells me to get up.
Then, I get up and have a breakfast.
>>Only then, do I get up and have breakfast.
Also, I often ask for favor when I visit a restaurant.
>>Also, I often ask for favors when I visit a restaurant.
I don\'t have any hate foods and ingredients.
>>I don\'t have any allergies to foods or other ingredients.
But I effort to not eat the pickled cucumber and pickled radish.
>>But I always make an effort to not eat a pickled cucumber and a pickled radish.
It is like stereotype, I heard that many food companies make them dirtily and they even do using rotten things, on TV.
>>It is like having a prejudice about something. I heard on TV that many food companies prepare them in unhygienic conditions, and they even use low quality or rotting ingredients.
So when I order a menu, I ask a clerk for serving dishes expecting pickles.
>>So when I order from the menu, I usually ask the server for a serving of pickles on a dish.
If I forget the asking, they will be a waste.
>>If I forget to ask, they will be wasted.
But ironically, I like jalapeno because of spicy tasting.
>>But ironically, I like jalapenos because of the spicy taste.
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