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The worst movie a family can wach together is horror movie.
>> The worst movie a family can wach together is a horror one.
I think it is fine to watch a horror movie with friends because it can make them closer.
>> I think it is fine to watch a horror movie with friends because it can make their relationship closer.
However, if you watch a horror movie with your family, you might curse and say bad words that is not appropriate to speak in front of your family.
>> However, if you watch a horror movie with your family, you might curse and say bad words that are not appropriate to speak in front of your them.
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