Homework

I appreciate the time and effort you spared for answering and sending this homework composition, James. Disneyland is definitely not only for children but also for those who are children at heart. I\'ve been to [이름] Kong once and visited Central City. I agree, it is heaven for people who love to shop. I hope you\'d enjoy your time there if you get the chance to visit [이름] Kong soon. Have a good one!

-Klein-
If you could go on an overseas trip during the summer holiday, where would likely go?
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I would like going to [이름]kong with my family.
>> I would like to go to [이름] Kong with my family.
>> OR: I would like to be able to go to [이름] Kong with my family.
>> OR: I wish to go to [이름] Kong with my family.
My daughter really likes playing in the amusement park.
>> OR: My daughter enjoys playing in the amusement park.
In [이름]kong, there is a famous amusement park, [이름]kong Disneyland.
>> There is a famous amusement park called Disneyland in [이름] Kong.
>> OR: [이름] Kong has a famous amusement park which is Disneyland.
So she can spend much time in the Disneyland.
>> She could spend a lot of time in Disneyland.
>> OR: She can enjoy most of her time there in Disneyland.
And there are many places to visit.
>> There are also other places to visit.
>> OR: There are many other places to visit as well.
>> OR: In addition to that, there are various places to visit.
It will be a good experience to us and will be a good memory in our life.
>> It would be a good experience to remember throughout our lives.
As you know, [이름]kong is a heaven of shoppers.
>> As you may know, [이름] Kong is a heaven for shoppers.
There are many luxury shops in [이름]kong and travelers buy luxury products easily and cheaply.
>> There are many luxury shops in [이름] Kong where travelers can purchase luxury items easily and for a cheaper price.
>> OR: There are many luxury shops in [이름] Kong where travelers can purchase luxury items easily and for an affordable price.
Anyway Traveling abroad makes us feel good.
>> Anyway, traveling abroad always makes us feel good.
>> OR: At any rate, it\'s always a good feeling to travel abroad.
>> OR: Generally speaking, traveling abroad is always exciting.