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2018-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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By couple of weeks ago, I was depressed because of our company situation.GM CEO forced to GMK carried out a large-scale restructuring. However, we overcomed this situation thanks to goverment support. I think that I have to accept the bad situation when I meet the misfortune of life. I tell myself I can do it. Sometime, I pray to god give me the power to overcome difficult situation.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]! You\'re a very strong person. I know that there isn\'t a situation you wouldn\'t be able to face because of your strong personality. But of course, remember that it\'s also okay to be not okay from time to time. Take care and see you! ~ Teacher Elisha

By couple of weeks ago, I was depressed because of our company situation.

>> A couple of weeks ago, I was depressed because of our company\'s situation.

GM CEO forced to GMK carried out a large-scale restructuring.

>> The GM CEO forced GMK to carry out a large-scale restructuring.
 However, we overcomed this situation thanks to goverment support.

>> However, we overcomed this situation thanks to the government\'s support.

I think that I have to accept the bad situation when I meet the misfortune of life.

>> I think I have to accept the unfortunate situations I meet in life.

 I tell myself I can do it.

>> I tell myself that I can do it.

Sometime, I pray to god give me the power to overcome difficult situation.

>> Sometimes, I pray to God to give me the power to overcome the difficult situation.

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